DarkAlfa's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Mayhem]

Quite good, really.

Things you should fix:
-Some sounds don't fit in the animation (minimal)
-While the animation is fluid, it is too slow. Try to make it faster.
-The credits button doesn't work.
-After the last frame of movie finishes, it loops again and gets you back to the Newgrounds presentation. Try to fix that as you want.

Sunshaft responds:

this all was fixed, but i ve got fatal error (i couldn t export movie) and this i send to friend, and he sended it back to me...

[Sonic Timelapse]

Cool, but...Not cool. ><

That was quite nice. I loved how the drawing turned out. But... The sprite animation was a tad annoying, and you should have stopped the movie when you finished the drawing for a while. I had no time to look at it. And after that, it looped, and the music still played. I think you should take care of these aspects. Don't get yourself down though. You draw awesomely! ^_^

liable-to-explode responds:

I fixed all of those problems. Thanks for the pointers anyhow!

[CandyCandy]

I thought I'd seen everything. I was wrong.

Well, not much to comment. No PreLoader, no real stuff, just a clown flipped horitzontally over and over and sweets turning around. Plus this voice that reaaaally gives me the creeps. I think I've said everythin'.

Fion responds:

OH EM GEE! UR MA BEZT FREND

[Super Sonic - His World]

Small mistakes, but pure beautyness.

Well, I gotta say, this is one of the best made flashes I've ever seen. Good job, man.
Personally, I like the idea of a musicated fight. I wanted to to one myself. :P Anyways, the tweening and graphics' animations are good done, and this adds many points to the rating.
There are, of course, silly mistakes that kept you from the ten, but they're all stetycal. For example, some animations are to slow and it really makes it look bad. Plus, in some sprites, there are traces of white lines from its original background. Did you separate the colors or traced the bitmap? If you did the first, I recommend you to do the second. Works like this: create a new symbol. Import and drag from the library the sprite sheet. Then go to Modify>Bit Map>Trace Bitmap (second option). In the options, put: one, one pixel, the first option (the first drop-down option) and the first option (the second drop-down). Wait, select and erase the background color. It should look better.
I hope I could help. Keep those submissions up! =D

Pienkaito responds:

This was my first attemp with NO tracing!
I didn't know that.

But I know that if you

ex.: change angle or/and resize

those stupid lines appear.