It is really good.
It is very good to see that you remember your pet before and after what's happened. You still carry her in your heart!
Well- As you said, this is just a memorial, a confession of your true emotions to her. So guys- loose it a bit! It's not the animation, but the message that it contains what counts!
Vivid needs support, so if you're emotionless, just- Shut up. She don't needs lies such as "Dogs don't matter." Hell, what do you know?
Vivid, you have all of my support, truly. I'm sure Ashes understood and thanked you and your family for relieving her from such pain. It's nobody's fault, I tell you. Cheer up, please.