DarkAlfa's Reviews

[In Memory of Her]

It is really good.

It is very good to see that you remember your pet before and after what's happened. You still carry her in your heart!

Well- As you said, this is just a memorial, a confession of your true emotions to her. So guys- loose it a bit! It's not the animation, but the message that it contains what counts!

Vivid needs support, so if you're emotionless, just- Shut up. She don't needs lies such as "Dogs don't matter." Hell, what do you know?

Vivid, you have all of my support, truly. I'm sure Ashes understood and thanked you and your family for relieving her from such pain. It's nobody's fault, I tell you. Cheer up, please.

[Sprite A Day : 19]

The other parts are just plain hilarous

I liked Mr-Shark's the most, to tell the truth =P But all in all the collab was guh-reat.
But... You forgot to add me in the co-author's list! *feels unloved*

[A Bread's Life]

SO EMOTIVE! ;W;

I PROMISE NOT TO EAT BREAD EVER AGAIN, THE POOR GUYS!
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*nibbles a toast*
xD But yeah, let's-a make a short review, won't we?

Graphics: 7
Well drown in my opinion, really. Perhaps the lines were a little rough and not no fluid, if you know what I mean (i.e.: The boy eyes (¬¬) when the bread is toasting is too pointy to be a circle-like figure xD;). Perhaps you should pay a little more attention to this next time? ^^
Sound: 5.5
Well, mang, sorry to say it, but it's true. It's not that I didn't like the music. It's just that... It lacked sound xD; I know you wanted it to be a musical-movie type flash, but still... I didn't think it fit. D:
Fun: 8
The argument (if there ever was one xD) is fine and quite funny, really. Perhaps you should have made it a tad longer so we could know the toast better and cry for its death? xP
Entertainment: 8.5
Nothing much to say here. Fun stuff to watch.

OVERALL: 7
Well, I really got myself entertained with the video, great job. Perhaps next time you should try to animate it a little better, or make the animation more fluid (are you using 30 fps? I don't know, but I'd personally recommend that to you). Some sound next time would be also awesome. Way to go, dude! A 7!
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Oh don't worry darling. I still voted 5. xDDDDDDDDD

Shi-Gu responds:

Well, I will try to improve waht you said but thanks anyway :D

[Meteor Defence]

Great game, I say.

Well, I have to say, the plot of this game isn't original. It's not the first time outer things want to destroy the World. But, I have to say, the gameplay is unique.
The idea to draw a barrier againist meteors is an idea that attracts me very. So I'd basically give the gameplay a 9 (I dislike 10s. It means perfect, and sadly, nothing is perfect.). However. There are sometimes the barrier draws itself a little bit after you press and drag the mouse. So it gets an 8.
The graphic part is really good. I love the space, the barrier texture, and the meteors. I would prefer the Earth not to have a .JPEG format, but it's still nice to see. So it gets a 9.
Now, the sound is a bit worse. Personally, I don't really like the song, which repeats himself over and over. Same happens with the meteors' impacts. So it gets a 6.
The fun playing this game? A lot. I got addicted to it in matter of seconds. The gameplay makes it be like that, so methinks one could be playing it a lot of time non stop. So it gets a 9!

All in all, an 8.25, but here it's an 8. I love this original idea and hope to see more from you. You could work the sound and graphics part a bit. Even though it may make the game run slower, it will be worth it!

[Super Mario Piano Ragtime]

Wootage!

It's hard to believe such simple concept can bring such awesomeness. Win on this one, I tell you! ^^