It is really good.
It is very good to see that you remember your pet before and after what's happened. You still carry her in your heart!
Well- As you said, this is just a memorial, a confession of your true emotions to her. So guys- loose it a bit! It's not the animation, but the message that it contains what counts!
Vivid needs support, so if you're emotionless, just- Shut up. She don't needs lies such as "Dogs don't matter." Hell, what do you know?
Vivid, you have all of my support, truly. I'm sure Ashes understood and thanked you and your family for relieving her from such pain. It's nobody's fault, I tell you. Cheer up, please.
The other parts are just plain hilarous
I liked Mr-Shark's the most, to tell the truth =P But all in all the collab was guh-reat.
But... You forgot to add me in the co-author's list! *feels unloved*
SO EMOTIVE! ;W;
I PROMISE NOT TO EAT BREAD EVER AGAIN, THE POOR GUYS!
*nibbles a toast*
xD But yeah, let's-a make a short review, won't we?
Well drown in my opinion, really. Perhaps the lines were a little rough and not no fluid, if you know what I mean (i.e.: The boy eyes (¬¬) when the bread is toasting is too pointy to be a circle-like figure xD;). Perhaps you should pay a little more attention to this next time? ^^
Well, mang, sorry to say it, but it's true. It's not that I didn't like the music. It's just that... It lacked sound xD; I know you wanted it to be a musical-movie type flash, but still... I didn't think it fit. D:
The argument (if there ever was one xD) is fine and quite funny, really. Perhaps you should have made it a tad longer so we could know the toast better and cry for its death? xP
Nothing much to say here. Fun stuff to watch.
Well, I really got myself entertained with the video, great job. Perhaps next time you should try to animate it a little better, or make the animation more fluid (are you using 30 fps? I don't know, but I'd personally recommend that to you). Some sound next time would be also awesome. Way to go, dude! A 7!
Oh don't worry darling. I still voted 5. xDDDDDDDDD
Well, I will try to improve waht you said but thanks anyway :D
Quite good, really.
Things you should fix:
-Some sounds don't fit in the animation (minimal)
-While the animation is fluid, it is too slow. Try to make it faster.
-The credits button doesn't work.
-After the last frame of movie finishes, it loops again and gets you back to the Newgrounds presentation. Try to fix that as you want.
this all was fixed, but i ve got fatal error (i couldn t export movie) and this i send to friend, and he sended it back to me...
Cool, but...Not cool. ><
That was quite nice. I loved how the drawing turned out. But... The sprite animation was a tad annoying, and you should have stopped the movie when you finished the drawing for a while. I had no time to look at it. And after that, it looped, and the music still played. I think you should take care of these aspects. Don't get yourself down though. You draw awesomely! ^_^
I fixed all of those problems. Thanks for the pointers anyhow!
I thought I'd seen everything. I was wrong.
Well, not much to comment. No PreLoader, no real stuff, just a clown flipped horitzontally over and over and sweets turning around. Plus this voice that reaaaally gives me the creeps. I think I've said everythin'.
OH EM GEE! UR MA BEZT FREND
Small mistakes, but pure beautyness.
Well, I gotta say, this is one of the best made flashes I've ever seen. Good job, man.
Personally, I like the idea of a musicated fight. I wanted to to one myself. :P Anyways, the tweening and graphics' animations are good done, and this adds many points to the rating.
There are, of course, silly mistakes that kept you from the ten, but they're all stetycal. For example, some animations are to slow and it really makes it look bad. Plus, in some sprites, there are traces of white lines from its original background. Did you separate the colors or traced the bitmap? If you did the first, I recommend you to do the second. Works like this: create a new symbol. Import and drag from the library the sprite sheet. Then go to Modify>Bit Map>Trace Bitmap (second option). In the options, put: one, one pixel, the first option (the first drop-down option) and the first option (the second drop-down). Wait, select and erase the background color. It should look better.
I hope I could help. Keep those submissions up! =D
This was my first attemp with NO tracing!
I didn't know that.
But I know that if you
ex.: change angle or/and resize
those stupid lines appear.
Not good at all.
Dude. This is epileptical. Not much to review on. You get a 0.
Say no more. It totally rocks
I just LOVE the way you put those fights. Fast, and however slow enough for me to see them ^^
For being the first flash. I just find 2 flaws: the JPEGS in the introduction, and the fact that there could be some sword noises. Appart from that, it's pretty good.
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